Magness - The Great Alchemist

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• yubaro Member

  February 2015

  Looks great! Kongorats! >-

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• techdojo Guru

  February 2015

  Looks good - but watch your spelling & grammer on the video.
  
  "Once there was a lovely kingdome"
  "Until evil darkness rised upon it..."
  
  I know English isn't your first language but as it's the opening scenes of your trailer you can't afford to make those kinds of mistakes and have your app taken seriously, it's a shame as the rest of the game looks really polished.

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• talis Guru

  February 2015 edited February 2015

  It can be this one who knows
  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kingdome
  
  To speak for my self, in my projects i am focusing on the other aspects of the program so much that always i am also making funny grammar mistakes, and forget to make someone native check it for me.
  As a non-native speaker i couldn't realize the mistake until you mentioned it.
  

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• ar2rsawseen Maintainer

  February 2015

  
  
  Thanks will relate the mistakes to them

  http://appcodingeasy.com/Gideros-Mobile

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• jdbc Member

  February 2015 edited February 2015

  Quite nice UI, installed and testing.

  JDBC Games on Google Play
  

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• techdojo Guru

  February 2015

  The grammer / spelling problem crops up again and again in indie apps - maybe we could setup a special area of the forum where non-native (English) speakers could post their ingame text / (short) scripts or app descriptions and then get a native speaker to perform a sanity check, and in return maybe non-native speakers could offer translation help & advice ????

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• petec Member

  February 2015

  grammar

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• techdojo Guru

  February 2015 edited February 2015

  Granma ???
  
  D'oh - see that's how easy it is! :-\"

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